I have wrote these before but I will do so again here:
I can smell the moist salt sea as it splashes below my balcony's edge. Our monstrous ship sailed smoothly cutting through the ocean water's as a hot knife would in a sea of cold butter.
The Moon: Like a silver cup full of night, the Moon tipped toward the sea.
Now that I am back, I have decided to update my book so it reads richer and fuller. I have added Acknowledgements; rev.ii may come out in late March or June of this year. I enlisted in 8 people to read my book again and their suggestions will be incorporated into the newer version; and I hope that will be the last.